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Summer 2003
Excised by the
Language Police
Items Deleted from a Doomed Fourth-Grade Reading Test
Most of the work of
the language police goes on behind securely closed doors. In her book,
Ravitch relies largely on caches of private documents that became public
thanks to court cases.
But as a member of the National Assessment Governing Board (NAGB),
charged by President Clinton with developing national tests in reading and
math, she was treated to a unique, insider’s look at the tests’ vetting
process. Though Congress never agreed to support the national tests and they
were never given, the tests went through a thorough, rather typical,
development process, including the review of each potential test item by a
"bias and sensitivity review" panel. Though the reviewed questions had
previously been approved by numerous educational experts, including members
of the NAGB, the panel eliminated many of them on the grounds that they were
biased or insensitive. Ravitch was baffled by many of their decisions--and
even more by the logic of their thinking. We think you will be too.
--Editors
Diane Ravitch
So what did the bias and sensitivity reviewers recommend?
The only way to explain their strained interpretations is to give actual
examples. I cannot reproduce the stories because some of them may yet appear
one day as test passages, but I will paraphrase the story sufficiently so
that the reader may judge whether the charge of bias is persuasive. The
examples, I believe, will demonstrate that the concept of bias has become
detached from its original meaning and has been redefined into assumptions
that defy common sense.
Women and Patchwork Quilting
The bias and sensitivity reviewers rejected a passage about patchwork
quilting by women on the western frontier in the mid-19th century. The
passage explained that mothers in that time taught their daughters to sew,
and together they made quilts for the girl’s dowry when she married.
Quilting was an economic necessity because it saved money, and there were no
factory-made quilts available until the end of the 19th century. The passage
briefly explained how quilts were assembled and described them as works of
art. The information in the passage was historically accurate, but the bias
and sensitivity panel (as well as the "content expert panel") objected to
the passage because it contained stereotypes of females as "soft" and
"submissive." Actually, the passage did nothing of the sort. It was a
description of why quilting was important to women on the frontier and how
it was done. Nothing in the passage excluded the possibility that mothers
and daughters were riding the range, plowing the fields, and herding cattle
during the day. The reviewers objected to the portrayal of women as people
who stitch and sew and who were concerned about preparing for marriage.
Historical accuracy was no defense for this representation of women and
girls, which they deemed stereotypical.
Class Distinction in the Ancient World
The bias panel did not like a story about growing up in ancient Egypt. The
story contrasted how people’s ways of living varied in accordance with their
wealth and status. Some lived in palaces, others were noblemen, others were
farmers or city workers. The size and grandeur of one’s house, said the
story, depended on family wealth. To the naked eye, the story was
descriptive, not judgmental. But the bias and sensitivity reviewers
preferred to eliminate it, claiming that references to wealth and class
distinctions had an "elitist" tone. The fact that these class distinctions
were historically accurate was irrelevant to the reviewers. In the world
that they wanted children to read about, class distinctions did not
exist--not now nor in the past. The desire to rewrite history is one that
continually plagues bias reviewers.
The Even Exchange
This story came from a children’s book by an African-American author. It was
about an African-American girl who wanted to learn how to jump rope like the
other girls in her neighborhood. She meets a neighbor who is an expert at
jumping rope, but who is attending summer school because she is not very
good at math. The new girl is good at math so the two agree to teach each
other what they do best. The bias reviewers did not like this story at all.
They found that it had serious bias problems because it showed an
African-American girl who was weak in math and was attending summer school.
The fact that this character thought of herself as not very good at math was
also deeply offensive and stereotypical, the bias reviewers believed. Even
though the author was African American and her book was intended to bolster
the self-esteem of black girls, it did not carry any weight with the bias
panel. African-American children could be portrayed only in a positive
light. Anything that showed weakness suggested negative stereotyping. In
this case, one African-American girl was good at math, and the other was
not. So far as I could tell, the story showed human variability, not
negative racial stereotyping, with each girl displaying different weaknesses
and different strengths.
The Silly Old Lady
The bias panel rejected a passage about a silly old woman who keeps piling
more and more gadgets on her bicycle until it is so overloaded that it
tumbles over. The language was clever, the illustrations were amusing, and
the story was higher in literary quality than the other fourth-grade reading
passages proposed for the test. But the bias panel rejected it. They felt
that it contained a negative stereotype of an eccentric old woman who
constantly changed her mind; apparently women, and especially women of a
certain age, must be depicted only in a positive light. Why would it upset
or distract fourth-grade children to see an older woman acting eccentrically
or changing her mind? The bias panel thought that children would get the
wrong idea about older women if they read such a story. They might conclude
that all women of a certain age behaved in this way.
The Blind Mountain Climber
One of the stranger recommendations of the bias and sensitivity panel
involved a true story about a heroic young blind man who hiked to the top of
Mount McKinley, the highest peak in North America. The story described the
dangers of hiking up an icy mountain trail, especially for a blind person.
The panel voted 12-11 to eliminate this inspiring story. First, the majority
maintained that the story contained "regional bias" because it was about
hiking and mountain climbing, which favors students who live in regions
where those activities are common. Second, they rejected the passage because
it suggested that people who are blind are somehow at a disadvantage
compared to people who have normal sight--that they are "worse off" and have
a more difficult time facing dangers than those who are not blind.
"Regional bias," in this instance, means that children
should not be expected to read or comprehend stories set in unfamiliar
terrain. A story that happened in a desert would be "biased" against
children who have never lived in a desert, and a story set in a tropical
climate would be biased against those who have never lived in a tropical
climate. Consider the impoverishment of imagination that flows from such
assumptions: No reading passage on a test may have a specific geographical
setting; every event must occur in a generic locale. Under these
assumptions, no child should be expected to understand a story set in a
locale other than the one that he or she currently lives in or in a locale
that has no distinguishing characteristics.
Even more peculiar is the assumption by the panel’s majority
that it is demeaning to applaud a blind person for overcoming daunting
obstacles, like climbing a steep, icy mountain trail. It is not
unreasonable, I believe, to consider blindness to be a handicap for a person
facing physical danger. By definition, people who are blind cannot see as
much or as well as people who have sight. Is it not more difficult to cope
with dangerous situations when one cannot see? Yet, perversely, the bias and
sensitivity panel concluded that this story celebrating a blind athlete’s
achievements and his heroism was biased against people who are blind.
Blindness, apparently, should be treated as just another personal attribute,
like the color of one’s hair or one’s height. In the new meaning of bias, it
is considered biased to acknowledge that lack of sight is a disability.
No More Owls
The passage about owls was like a children’s encyclopedia entry. It
described how their keen eyesight and hearing enabled them to hunt at night
for rodents. When I saw that this passage was rejected, I imagined that it
was because of the violence associated with hunting (although that’s how the
owl survives). I was wrong. The passage was rejected because a
Native-American member of the bias committee said that owls are taboo for
the Navajos. Consequently, the entire committee agreed that the passage
should be dropped. The test publisher added a notation that the owl is
associated with death in some other cultures and should not be mentioned
anymore, neither in texts nor in illustrations.
Here is a classic problem presented by today’s bias and
sensitivity review process. If any cultural group attributes negative
connotations to anything, or considers it taboo or offensive, then that
topic will not be referred to, represented, described, or illustrated on
tests. But owls exist. They are real birds. They are not creatures of the
imagination. Nevertheless, to avoid giving offense, the tests will pretend
that owls don’t exist. Owls are to be deleted and never again mentioned to
the highly vulnerable and sensitive American schoolchild.
See Related Story: Thin Gruel by
Diane Ravitch
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